Name: Dakota Stammen
Hometown: Wapakoneta, OH
Drawing Date: March 31, 2016
Hi, I am Dakota Stammen and I live with my parents in a small city called Wapakoneta, Ohio. I am currently a freshman at the University of Northwest Ohio (UNOH), which is located in Lima, Ohio. I commute 45 minutes to school every day to attend the various classes on my schedule. So far I have completed two quarters towards my degree and have made the Dean’s list for both quarters. I am currently in my third quarter.
My goal is to seek a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Administration. Although UNOH only has an Associate Degree in Computer Administration, I plan to pursue a Bachelor’s Degree at Wright State University in Dayton, Ohio after I achieve my Associates Degree at UNOH. Then after I acquire my Bachelor Degree I hope to obtain a Computer Administration position at a well-established firm.
I am currently working part-time at McDonalds to save money for my college expenses. However, with only making minimum wage the savings account does not increase very fast. Since I am now in my third quarter at UNOH I have pretty much depleted my savings.
Therefore, I was looking for another avenue to help pay for my college expenses. That is why I entered this scholarship contest. Although I didn’t think my chances of winning were very high, I was thrilled when I received a phone call and an email informing me that I was the chosen winner of the $10,000 Scholarship. This $10,000 Scholarship will help me pay most of my tuition costs for the next three quarters. This $10,000 Scholarship will also help alleviate my concern on how I was going to pay for the upcoming quarters, minimize my accumulation of college debt, and help me achieve my dream of becoming a Computer Administrator. No words can really thank you enough for this $10,000 Scholarship. So I will just say from the bottom of my heart—THANK YOU. This opportunity means a great deal to me!!!
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Sometimes a task can seem monumental when you try to visualize the entire thing, but if you break it down into smaller goals suddenly it can become manageable. When I first started to consider going to college so that I could make a better life for myself and my daughter, I thought it was going to be almost impossible. I was working in a convenience store trying to make ends meet as a single mother, but I just knew that there was something more out there for me. I had the drive to build a career that did not involve running credit cards through the machine and cleaning the public bathroom, I just needed the skills and the opportunity to determine what that other dream job was. It can be difficult to leave what is familiar, and I actually really liked the people who owned the convenience store and knew that they would be sad to see me go, but it was time to strike out on my own. I set a goal of successfully finishing one semester at my local junior college, just to see if I could manage it, and much to my delight I not only completed the semester, but earned a place on the Dean’s List as well. I felt a tremendous amount of pride in this accomplishment, and it certainly wasn’t easy, but it helped to give me the confidence I needed to set longer term goals. I found that I was very interested in the sciences and how the human body works. I am now about to graduate with my Associate’s of Science degree, having maintained my position on the Dean’s List the entire time, and I finally know that I am setting the kind of example for my daughter that I always dreamed of when I was wringing out the mop and restocking the shelves at the convenience store.
I am now eager to take my education to the next level by pursuing a degree in nursing at ____ University. It is my goal after graduating to become a nurse serving lower income and underrepresented communities. I am a naturally compassionate person, and because of my lower socio-economic background and life experience, I can relate easily to people who may fear going to see medical professionals whom they perceive as different from them, but whose services they need. I can help bridge that gap, and thereby encourage more people to actually get help that they require in a comforting and non-threatening environment.
My commitment to my education is strong and I know that, if admitted, I will be able to earn a solid grade point average, and graduate with the skills and experience I will need to build my career as a nurse. I feel such relief and gratitude to know that I have found my calling, and I am eager to begin this new stage of my education. Certainly the next two years will be challenging—requiring much juggling of schedules and time management expertise--but I have done it before, and with my clear goal in my mind, I know I can do it again with equal or greater success. Even though my commitment to my education takes some time away from my child, I know that ultimately it will be worth the sacrifice because she will see how important an education is by witnessing all I have given up to achieve mine, and what a strong career I will be able to build because of those same sacrifices.
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